One week down

Many more to come, I hope. Now the stage is set for me to set the stage, which will carry us through the end of Three Arrivals. That should take about two months.

In terms of readership, we’re holding steady at about five (but the journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step! Even if that step is just walking over to the car). I’m gonna kick the self-promotion engine into high gear over the weekend (except I don’t really run in all that many circles I haven’t mentioned it in already, so tell your friends).

In other news, I turned the registration requirement for commenting off, and I will be upping my pace of writing quite a bit. I’m going to be traveling from August until about the end of the year, and I’d rather not have to worry about writing two a week while I’m off trying to enjoy myself. My pie-in-the-sky goal is a buffer of 32 on August 25th, but that doesn’t seem likely to happen–right now I’m nine ahead, so I’d have to double my pace and maintain that for eight weeks, and I’m not sure I’ve got that much writing I’d be willing to post in me. More likely, I’ll end up a bit short, and I’ll just keep going until the buffer plus whatever I do manage to write runs out, and we’ll take a December break or somesuch.

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Three Arrivals No. 2 – We’ve Arrived

The sun rose over Vrimderheimdalskaagerholmegvorrighrimdalholm, burning away the fog which hung over the city as a reminder of the last night’s storm.

A storm of another sort was brewing in the halls of the Guild of Aeromancers. The man who had arrived the night before stood at the center of the room, facing a raised semicircular table whose wings reached around him. Seven mages sat behind it, and an eighth stood by his side.

“Mikel Skräskyddsling, you stand before the Septumvirate accused of illegally communicating with an unsanctioned mage, aiding and abetting an unsanctioned mage, bringing an unsanctioned mage onto Guild property, bringing a non-mage onto Guild property without express permission, offering admission to a potential aspirant without the consent of the Septumvirate, promising admission to a prospective aspirate without the consent of the Septumvirate, admitting an aspirant without the consent of the Septumvirate, admitting an unsanctioned mage to the Guild without the consent of the Council, delaying the Septumvirate’s deliberations on important guild business—”

Mikel Skräskyddsling had, to this point, held himself in check, his expression showing boredom, irritation, and finally outright anger. At last he exploded, interrupting the litany: “This is a farce. Move on.”

Levelly, the speaker for the Septumvirate continued. “You are accused of fifteen other violations. Do you waive your right to hear them?”

“Yes!”

“Hans Georgsson,” the speaker said, addressing the last night’s arrival. “You stand before the Septumvirate as a witness to some of Master Skräskyddsling’s crimes.”

“Where’s Anja?” Hans demanded. “Is she safe?”

“They haven’t told you?” Mikel blurted out. “This is outrageous.”

The speaker began to speak at the same time, his voice gaining in volume to drown Mikel out. “She is safe, and will be well taken care of until we have reached a final decision on the matter. We do not, Hans Georgsson, mistreat our guests—even those we do not expect.” His last three words carried a note of rebuke, and as he said them he cast a look at Mikel. Mikel fumed, and the speaker said, “Master Skräskyddsling. Have you anything—excuse me, anything constructive to say in your defense before we begin in earnest?”

Mikel took a deep breath. “Each and every one of you is mad.” He raised his voice to cut through the Septumvirate’s protests. “Yes, mad! This girl sought out a showdown with a draug, and more than that she—untrained!—won. She is a prospect we cannot afford to pass—”

“Your views on Anja Grevdarsdottir are known to us,” the speaker finally interjected. “We persist in our opinion that, even if the claims made about her can in fact be substantiated, you were well outside your authority in bringing her here without notifying the Septumvirate or the Council.”

“I have no answer for your second charge—”

“The first reasonable thing—”

“—but,” Mikel continued, “that I feel I am acting with the Guild’s best interests in mind. Regarding your doubt about the truth of the rumors about Anja Grevdarsdottir, I present to you a witness to the events in question: Hans Georgsson.”

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Commentary, Three Arrivals No. 2

Yes. Vrimderheimdalskaagerholmegvorrighrimdalholm. You see, this universe began as a place to set a roleplaying game, and one of the first two things I decided was “let’s make them sound kind of faux-Viking-like.” I took that idea and ran with it probably about five or six syllables too far. There are a number of other ridiculous things about this world that the characters don’t really pay any attention to. I think that’s why I enjoy writing in it so much.

Also, I don’t like writing dialog. I can never tell if it’s any good.

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Three Arrivals No. 1

It began on a summer night like many others. Thick dark clouds, pouring rain down upon the city, hid the moons from view. The occasional flash of lightning cast sharp-edged shadows onto the streets, and the rolling bassy crescendo of thunder underscored the patter of the rain on the roofs.

Lightning struck the spires of the Guild of Electromancers rather more often, blanketing the High Quarter in a continuous rumble of thunder. Two streets over, the lightning, in a curious stop-start sort of way, illuminated two cloaked figures trudging along in the wet. They reached their goal, a gate in the wall surrounding a tall tower which vanished into the clouds. They stood before the heavy wooden doors. On the lintel above them, the words “Akademi der luftsmagiker” were engraved.

The taller of the two figures shifted his heavy load. “We seem to have arrived, milady.”

“Yes,” said the other. Her voice was a child’s, but it carried an authority and a wisdom well beyond the years of its owner.

The gates swung open, and the two figures walked inside.

 

A short distance to the east, a ship rose and fell in time with the storm-tossed surface of the river Heimdal. A lamp burned in the cabin at the stern, and inside, a young man, bathed in the lamplight, was organizing large stacks of paper, each covered in dense handwriting in the elvish script.

On the weather deck stood two miserable-looking sailors, rain rolling off their oilskins in sheets.

“It’s good luck we made it in before the storm,” one ventured.

“And bad luck we got ourselves stuck on the midnight watch,” the other replied. “Why did his lordship have to take a ship? I heard they got the south roads in order after the thaw, finally.”

“He’s got a thing about wagons.”

“Odd boy.”

“You’re right at that. And he hasn’t gotten any better lately.”

One leaned over the stern rail. “He’s still got a lamp lit.”

The other joined him. “I wonder what he’s doing.”

The first gave him a look. “I wouldn’t, if I was you.”

The second grunted, and silence descended over the deck.

In the cabin, the boy sighed and ran a hand through his hair. A moment later he was no longer alone.

 

A few miles to the west, an odd procession made its way through the maze of streets. The rain plinked off of four eight-foot metal figures, which escorted a much shorter woman. They came to a door, below a sign which declared that herein a conjurer for hire could be found. One of the constructs stepped forward as if to knock. The woman raised a hand to forestall it and pounded on the door herself. It was a few minutes before it opened.

Standing in the door was a bleary-eyed woman, but the sight of her nighttime visitor shocked her fully awake. “Rakel? What—”

“I’ll explain later. Take these around to the back and see that I’m awake by dawn,” the visitor cut in. The other woman stepped back to let her by, and the first went into the building. She half-turned, adding, “It’s good to see you again, Kajsa.”

Kajsa simply nodded, stepping out into the rain and leading the constructs away.

 

Some time later all three—the girl with a voice beyond her years, the boy who was not alone, and the nighttime visitor­—slept. The storm went on.

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Further progress!

Well, the site is set up basically to my satisfaction. I figured out a passable way of archiving things so that it’s relatively easy to get to an individual part. I’ve digitized three entries, which means I’m more than 10 days ahead on things typed in (and about a month ahead on stuff written down). I figure I’ll write one entry this weekend, which should put me four weeks ahead at the end of this week. That’s the sweet spot, I think.

The first chapter is called ‘Three Arrivals’, in which three characters arrive somewhere and are introduced.

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Many Words

I have something of a title now. I confess to liking it a lot—at first glance it looks deep and meaningful, but if you stop to think about it there’s really very little substance there[1].

[1] This is an example of me not taking myself too seriously. You’ll see a lot of that.

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Progress!

It is being made on a couple of fronts.

First, there’s the buffer. I’ve got quite a lot of it, particularly if I’m only doing two updates a week. Since I’ve got more than a month’s worth of it I’ll be starting updates on Tuesday the 22nd. Second, there’s the digitization of the buffer[1]. That’s going well, and takes less time than I thought it would per entry.

Third, there’s the theming and appearance. Overall I’m happy, although I’ll have to do a little HTML find-and-replace to get the text in the entries to flow how I want it to (removing paragraph margins, adding initial paragraph indentation). The category archive pages I’m not thrilled with—I’d rather there be excerpts for posts visible—but I can’t find a way to change that, and I like the way the theme looks overall, so I guess I’ll have to live with it.

Fourth, there’s that pesky About page. I’ll come up with something, I swear.

Fifth, I’ll need to come up with a title to go in the header (Coming Soon is descriptive now, but ideally that will change). I get the feeling this is going to be the hardest part.

[1] When writing seriously I put everything on actual paper first, and then type it in for publication—it gives me a free edit and proofread, although I have to proofread again anyway thanks to my limited ability to type error-free.

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