Weekend open thread

It’s that time of week again!

I have good news and bad news. The good news is that Rakel’s story heats up in the next entry or two, and then stays heated up until about the end of her chapter. Further, I’ve been doing some work on the science fiction story which will air while I’m rebuilding my regular buffer, and am very pleased with where it’s headed. Here’s the finalized schedule: Lägraltvärld updates will run out the Tuesday before Christmas. The science fiction story will begin the Tuesday after Christmas, and will run for four weeks. I can say that without any qualifiers, because I’m going to split it up into exactly eight chunks, no matter how long each chunk is.

The bad news is that I’ve discovered Minecraft. Most of you are probably familiar with the extent to which I am able to obsess, and can see why this is a bad thing.

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The Nighttime Visitor No. 4 – Hello Again

Two’s body lay disassembled on the floor, and its head sat atop a nearby crate, watching Rakel work. She sat cross-legged by Two’s knees, a shin piece and a thigh piece in her lap. Her eyes were closed, hands resting on each piece, and she murmured to herself. Under her hands the metal slowly shifted, and a few minutes later the knee joint had knit itself back together. Rakel moved it carefully through its full range of motion, and, satisfied, pushed it away.

She scooted over to start on the other leg and let the magic flow. She watched the metal move with a painful lack of speed, willing herself not to lose patience without much success. She could have had Two together in five minutes if she didn’t have other magic to work today; taking Two slowly was disproportionately easier on the Weave than taking it fast. She toiled onward, keeping the part of her mind that housed her growing desire to finish the rest with a snap of her fingers strictly separate from the part of her mind working the magic.

Despite its leisurely pace the work was still exhausting, and when Rakel slotted Two’s head back into place at midday, she did so with a long yawn. She put her hands on the neck joint and focused, and a handful of heartbeats later she gave the head a tug to make sure it wasn’t going anywhere. There was one more step, though; Kajsa would have had to fiddle with the truebinding if she didn’t want Two’s bound spirit flinging pieces of the construct around the shop. Rakel stretched out her senses and felt it, the old familiar spirit straining against the bars of its prison. Rakel worked slowly and carefully to expand the cage; it was one of the few things she could claim to be conscientious about. Once, she had witnessed a truebound spirit make an uncontrolled escape. The crater was still there, and the conjurer wasn’t.

She wiped away the sweat that stood out on her brow, gave her work one final once-over, and let Two’s spirit into the newly expanded cage. A few seconds passed, and Rakel let out a breath. It wasn’t as if she’d ever pay so little attention as to get it wrong, but it never hurt to be cautious.

Two stood up, radiating a faint air of malevolence. Rakel paid it no mind. Every truebind went that way until the spirit probed its prison to the extent that it could and resigned itself to servitude. Two had existed in one form or another for almost a decade now, and quickly lost heart. Rakel sent it to the other room while she started her second project.

Rakel was, in many ways, a nontraditional conjurer. She chalked it up to getting all the practicality her fellows at the Guild seemed to lack. It was fair to stereotype them thusly: a conjurer’s entire life consisted of producing talismans for the Guild to sell, making weapons and armor for themselves, building a couple of constructs, and then taking them on glorious charges into armies of hiisi and falling back only when their constructs were so clogged with gore they could barely swing a weaponized arm. It was a simple life, though not, Rakel would readily admit, one without its attractions. It was also very dangerous, and Rakel had had the luck to train under a conjurer with a healthy sense of self-preservation. He had pointed out that even if a conjurer could account for ten thousand hiisi before, inevitably, he stayed in the fight for a moment too long, found his retreat cut off, and was himself cut down by the savage brutes, he wouldn’t have come close to paying for his training. In short, a dead hero is still dead.

It was a point Rakel had taken to heart, and, when working for the army, she had always fought with her brain first and her martial skill as a last resort. Along the line she’d had an epiphany about her talents: they weren’t an end but a means, nothing more than a way to make tools which could keep her alive.

By contrast, most conjurers saw their creations as something more than that; many of them treated their constructs as friends, or at the very least comrades in arms. Either way, a construct was something owed great respect, and building one was an act of great gravity.

Smiling cheerfully, Rakel wondered if they would be more shocked that she’d turned the abomination before her into a construct, or that she had such a menial task for it in mind. It was a creature of boards, nailed and lashed together into a very roughly humanoid shape, one arm tipped by a claw just small enough to grasp the handle Rakel had nailed to the bar across the door, and the other a massive unbalanced club of a limb that probably outweighed Rakel herself.

“Welcome to the land of the living, Doorman,” she said.

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The Nighttime Visitor No. 3 – The Good Part

Rakel irritably refolded Henrik’s letter and stuffed it back into the envelope. The man had a finely-tuned ability to get under her skin, and it seemed to Rakel that he never missed a chance to use it. She reflected that prescience was quite the advantage when it came to being deliberately inflammatory, and then felt guilty for the thought. Henrik would have been quite rightfully offended if he’d heard her voice it; it was a sure thing he had less petty things to focus his talent on.

He was being deliberately inflammatory, though. Rakel had a theory that something about divining inspired a measure of miscreancy in its practitioners, and if Henrik’s measure was an infuriating capacity for writing annoying letters, Rakel could handle it. It was certainly better than going around robbing banks, wrecking families, or dreaming up inventive new ways to murder people, just to name a few of the instances of which she had heard.

She put those particular unpleasant memories back in their box. The Hammer and Anvil’s tavern was still empty but for Rakel, a yawning innkeeper, and the smell of frying ham. Rakel sipped at her tea. Even with the early start, it was going to be a long day.

Twenty minutes later, Rakel hit the road with a breakfast under her belt and the second part of Kajsa’s plan ahead. Kajsa had been busy after Rakel left, reasoning quite correctly that a bolt hole was an asset when working undercover. She had also reasoned that anonymity was a good quality for such a place, and had sent the constructs out to find one.

Find one they had. It was a boarding house owned by a man who skirted the boundary between legitimate and shady, if willingness to take a large, upfront payment from an anonymous source was any indication. Kajsa had paid for a pair of rooms opening onto a back alley, about an hour’s walk south of the Hammer and Anvil.

That had been a bit of luck. It was only a mile or two from Rakel’s assigned area, and while she didn’t mind a long walk, a shorter one was almost always better, provided it went to the same place.

Rakel gave the landlord a signed letter from Kajsa and got her key, and then went around to her door. The lock was new and, as far as Rakel could tell, quite a formidable one. As she swung the door open she saw it had a heavy bar as well. She looked at it speculatively, an idea forming, and grinned, heading inside.

The rooms were as Kajsa had described—each about fifteen feet on the sides, windowless, unfurnished, and dusty. Spacious, compared to most city lodgings, but otherwise, Rakel thought, a thoroughly unpleasant place to live. Fortunately that wasn’t the plan. She let the door stand open and looked over the neatly-arranged things covering the floor.

There were quite a number of them: two extra swords, a mail coat, and a box of talismans, to start, but Kajsa hadn’t stopped there. Rakel saw a box of candles, two lamps, a flint and steel, a bedroll, boots, snowshoes, and a parka, writing paper, and a wardrobe’s worth of clothing among the rest of it. Two must have had to make a few trips, she mused, and Kajsa had thought of everything.

Speaking of Two— but, when Rakel looked out the door, it hadn’t arrived yet. She had some other things to do to pass the time, and set about them. She lit the lamps, hanging one in each room, and began to move her things into the back. When she finished, she locked the door behind her and set out toward the last market square she’d passed on her way to the boarding house. A few purchases later, she had a coil of good strong rope over one shoulder, a hammer and a bag of nails in her hands, and a boy following her with a wheelbarrow full of arm-length planks.

She had him empty the barrow at the mouth of her alley, and shrugged expressively when he asked about the construct standing a few yards away with a cartload of crates. She tipped the boy a handful of chieftains, and with an impish look and a half bow he was off. Rakel waited until he turned a corner and approached the construct. It wasn’t one of hers or one of Kajsa’s, but it held out a note as she drew near.

“Excellent,” said Rakel, reading over it. It was what she had been expecting; Kajsa must have borrowed the construct for the day. “Are you able to help me move all this inside?”

The construct responded by effortlessly lifting one of the man-sized crates, and a few minutes later they were all inside. The construct had helped with the lumber while Rakel had signed the note “Rakel Andersdottir”, and added, “Received. Regards to Kajsa Asgeirsdottir” below her name.

That done, she gave the note back to the construct and sent it away. She fetched a prybar from the back and levered the top off of one of the crates. From it she lifted Two’s head, smiling at it and saying, “Hello again.”

She set it aside and got to work.

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Weekend open thread

Dear readers, salve of my soul’s constant yearning for the adoration of millions, I bid you good evening.

There aren’t millions of you, and adoration is probably too strong a word (‘tepid ambivalence’ is both more redundant and more apt, I expect), but nobody’s perfect.

Again, it’s a weekend in which I don’t really have much to say; I’ve spent some of my evenings this week playing an alternate history scenario in Arsenal of Democracy. I have to say I’ve been enjoying it. Australasia (Australasia: Australia, New Guinea, Rabaul to Guadalcanal, New Zealand) is, even as we speak, preparing for its invasion of Indochina’s (Indochina: southern Indonesia, Vietnam, and points slightly west and north) island territories, utilizing its fleet of aircraft carriers and submarines to pin the main body of the Indochinese army on the mainland. I plan to replicate that strategy against the People’s Republic of the Rising Sun (Japan, Korea, lots and lots of Pacific islands) later on, once I have the industry of Indochina’s island territory to supplement my own. Nothing like good strategic planning to offset a smaller land army, I always say.

I don’t have much Many Words news, either. I’ve stalled a bit on writing, but on the other hand I have a pretty good idea of what’s going to happen over the next thirty or so entries. That makes the current stuff much less daunting to write. Work progresses on the science fiction story which I’ll be running to cover myself as I rebuild my buffer. So far it’s different stylistically. I hope to keep that through the whole thing; I find that much of the stuff I’ve written so far for Many Words overuses ‘had’, and forcing myself to write in a way I normally don’t is great for my awareness of such things.

Ooh, I just remembered: the number of spam comments has now eclipsed the number of good comments. I don’t mean to say that all four to eight of you should be saying more, though; I just thought it was interesting.

There are some crossword puzzles waiting for me. I’m going to stare futilely at them for an hour or so, then I’m going to write the end of an entry for Many Words. Until next time.

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A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 3 – A Decision

Mikel led them out of the Septumvirate’s chamber and read the question off Hans’ face. “It could go either way,” he said. “You seem to have convinced Ansgar Leifsson—the old man,” he clarified. “He’s the senior member of the Septumvirate. His word carries a lot of weight, and more than that he’s as stubborn as a reindeer. Expect a four-three vote,” he added, after some consideration. “I don’t know which way it will swing.”

“Well, it’s something,” Hans sighed. “Less than I would’ve liked.”

“More than you had reason to expect, after that display,” Mikel said. “The last thing you want them to do is think you more of a threat than is worth training.”

“A threat?” said Anja.

“Magic is dangerous—”

“So I’ve heard.”

“—and things like what you did have a way of spiraling out of control,” he finished, as if she hadn’t interrupted at all.

“It didn’t, though,” she protested.

“That you were able to control it at all makes you look to them like an accident waiting to happen.” Anja opened her mouth, but Mikel cut her off. “If they accept you I’m sure we’ll be able to answer all your questions. If they don’t, it’s irrelevant. Either way I have duties to attend to.”

They came to a stop in front of a door. After a moment Anja recognized it as belonging to the room she’d used overnight.

“Good luck,” said Mikel, turning and walking away.

Anja watched him go, and then tried the door. It opened, and she went in.”

“Will you be needing anything, milady?” Hans asked, standing just outside.

“No, thank you,” she said. She paused, and then added, “And I think you should just call me Anja now.”

“If you’d rather, mi— Anja,” Hans said. He frowned. “If anything comes up I’m the next door up the hall.”

She nodded and pushed the door closed. Someone had made the bed while she’d been gone. She threw herself down on it and rubbed at her eyes. It was obvious Hans was worried about her. Dropping her title had signaled to him that she considered her past a closed book. She doubted she was any happier about it than he was, but, after the journey here and the news that her future was not, in fact, as certain as it had looked a tenday ago, she could hardly begrudge him his concern. After what had transpired in Jötunberg, he was—

—he was the closest thing she had to a father. It was the first time since she’d left that she’d allowed herself to think about that in all its enormity, and she felt two months’ worth of grief welling up. She rolled over and buried the tears in her pillow.

After a while her eyes closed, and she slept fitfully.

 

Some time later, an insistent knock at the door woke her. She rubbed at a kink in her neck as she stood, and winced at her reflection in the mirror. As she ran her hands through her hair in a futile attempt to tame it, she considered what she’d give for a comb. That got her thinking about the other things she’d given up of late, and she felt the tears coming again—

She closed her eyes, let out a trembling breath, and pushed the thought firmly away. The knock sounded again, and Anja pulled the door open to reveal a young man rocking back and forth impatiently. “You’ve been called before the Septumvirate,” he said, and, message delivered, wandered off.

There was no guide in evidence, so she set off up the hallway. She paused by Hans’ door, and could hear him snoring behind it. She decided to let him rest. The walk to the Septumvirate’s chamber was just as long the second time. She took a moment to steady her nerves before going in.

The Septumvirate sat in their places, hoods up. Ansgar Leifsson spoke. Anja heard a note of displeasure in his voice, and a fist of ice clenched around her heart. “Well, child,” he said, “we’ve decided.”

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Commentary, A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 3

I write with serialization in mind, but not scheduling; basically any time I have to stop writing one entry and start a new one in the middle of the conversation, I have to add or remove dialog tags at the seam. If the conversation ends up going online with both halves in the same week, I can generally get rid of them; on the other hand, if it goes up with one half on a Thursday and the next half on a Tuesday a few weeks down the line, I try to put them back in so you’re not absolutely baffled about who’s talking to who until you go back and read the previous entry.

What it comes to is that if I eventually compile Many Words and publish it somehow, I’m going to have to do a lot of cleanup at the transitions to get rid of those artifacts.

In other news, I need to work on my writing of emotions. Sigh.

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A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 2 – Fair Warning

The Septumvirate seemed to be content to allow the old man to speak for them for the time being. To Anja, it looked as though they’d regained their studied impassivity. She couldn’t read a thing in their faces. She glanced from side to side. Hans was still hovering protectively by her chair, and Mikel Skräskyddsling stood with his hands clasped behind him a few yards away. She thought she saw a cautionary flicker in his expression as their eyes met.

“That could make things rather more complicated,” the old man said. “I expected it won’t be too much to ask to leave it in your custody for a few days longer?” Anja nodded gravely. “Good. There are a few other matters to discuss before we retire to make our decision. First: which of the other guilds did you contact?”

“The aendemancers, conjurers, and abjurers, master,” Hans said.

“You received no reply from any of them?”

“No, sir.”

The old man harrumphed. “I would have expected the first two to leap at the chance. The talent you have shown, child, would have been directly applicable to either of them, unless I miss my guess.” A far-off look passed over his features. “I suppose it’s their loss. Earlier my colleague—” he gestured toward the speaker for the Septumvirate “—was going to ask if you were able to think of any other instances which might have been manifestations of magical talent. Now that we’ve asked the more important questions, we should revisit that one.” He sat back expectantly.

“I can’t think of any obvious ones,” Anja said.

The old man leaned forward with a furrowed brow. “None? Do you perhaps see things that turn out not to be there? Or perhaps have you found that you are able to tell what people are feeling when it isn’t apparent?”

Anja shrugged, and was about to say no when Hans said, “If you’ll allow me to speak, master, she’s just being modest. She always seems to know what’s on my mind.”

“That’s not magic, though,” Anja protested. She looked over her shoulder at Hans. “I just know how you think.”

The old man’s mood seemed to brighten a bit. “It is possible for magic to be subtle, you know,” he said, “although you wouldn’t guess it. Do you consider yourself lucky?”

Anja laughed. Hans looked down, shocked; she guessed he hadn’t expected to hear such bitterness out of her. “No,” she said shortly.

“Perhaps ‘lucky’ is the wrong word. Do you find that, in the long run, things tend to turn out in your favor?”

“No,” she repeated, but not without a moment’s hesitation. She considered that she might not have been strictly honest, but it was complicated.

Unaccountably, she thought, her answer seemed to delight him. “Excellent,” he said. “I rather like you, although between you and me I believe my colleagues are trying to decide if they should merely throw you out, or if they should throw you before the Magehunters. If none of them have questions for you—” and none spoke up “—I’ll try to bring them around to my point of view. In the meantime I would suggest that you take a rest. Thank you for your forthrightness.”

He gave her a piercing look, but she had seen worse, and she thought she hid her discomfort at it well. “Thank you for your time and your hospitality,” she replied.

The old man waved a hand. “Of course. We will send for you when we’ve made a decision.”

Anja stood, finding herself steadier on her feet than before, but she let Hans take her arm regardless. They turned to follow Mikel out of the chamber.

“Actually,” said the old man, “one more thing.” Anja turned to face him. “Did someone put you up to that little performance with the draug?”

Anja shook her head. “It was my idea.”

“And you had planned it ahead of time?”

She felt her cheeks burn, and suddenly found the floor in front of her very interesting. “Yes, master.”

“You have a theatrical streak a mile wide,” he said. Anja could glean nothing from his tone. She watched him for a moment to see if anything else was forthcoming, and eventually inclined her head respectfully.

There was a beat, and then the old man raised an eyebrow. “Go on, then. We’ll see you again soon.”

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Commentary, A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 2

Remember way back when, when I said that there was something theme-related to say, but I got sidetracked and forgot to say it? No? Well, here it is anyway.

The guilds of magic number eleven (and I think I’ve mentioned nine by name). Some of them are officially styled ‘School’—so it’s the Guild of Aeromancers, but the School of Conjurers.

Almost-live remarks: I feel like I got the dialog pretty nearly where I’d like it to be here. I’d also like to think that the characters are getting better. On the other hand, that’s a judgment I’ll leave to you.

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