A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 10 – A Coda

Mikel Skräskyddsling wound his way up the tower of the Guild of Aeromancers, finally reaching a nondescript door. He rapped on it, and after a moment Isak Akessen opened it and stepped into the hallway. Akessen was the Guild’s seneschal, and Mikel had a favor to ask.

Akessen realized. “What can I do for you today?”

“Any letters for Anja Skräskyddsling should come to me first.”

“Of course.”

 

Akessen closed the door to his study and went back to the tafl table.

“Your move,” said his opponent. While Akessen considered his next move, the opponent continued, “That was Mikel Skräskyddsling, I expect?”

“It was. He wanted the girl’s mail delivered to him first, just as you guessed.”

“Good. It will be coming to me before either of them, correct?”

Akessen looked up, momentarily surprised. “I wouldn’t dream of doing otherwise, Master Leifsson.”

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Commentary, A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 10

Happy New Year, folks. I told you this one was short.

This is the end of what I might call the first season of Many Words; the board is set, and it’s time to get our pieces moving. Eirik gets his own chapter next time, but for Anja and Rakel I don’t have as much planned. I think they’ll end up sharing one, which I think I’m going to call First Impressions. As I’ve said many times before, I have something a little bit different planned for the upcoming few weeks. Once I get a little bit more of it written, you’ll get to experience some of my science fiction, a story of war and valor and all that jazz.

That could be a few weeks, though. I’m running a tabletop game in the spring, and since it’s a system I’m writing myself I kinda need to buckle down and get it closer to done. I’m not going to commit myself to any time in particular, being lazy like that, and will merely say that it shouldn’t be much past mid-January.

I’ll see you then.

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A Voice Beyond Her Years No. 9 – Her Father’s Seal

“A letter from home?” Mikel asked baldly.

“Where did you get this?” Anja demanded. “And why did you open it?”

“It wasn’t for you,” Mikel said sharply. “It came to the Guild via the Council. We’re not even necessarily obliged to let you get mail from outside the Guild even when it does have your name on it.”

Anja glared for a moment, then opened the letter and read over it quickly. “He wants you to send me home?”

“He does.”

Anja watched Mikel’s face closely, but could read nothing from it. At length, she asked, “Are you going to?”

Mikel shrugged. “We might. He can’t force us to, but at the moment we have quite a number of reasons to look at you with some measure of distrust.”

Silence stretched on for a few moments. Mikel wore an expression which begged for a response. Eventually Anja spoke. “Alright. I wasn’t completely honest when I got here, but I have reasons. I left home because that’s the best thing I could’ve done for the most people.”

Mikel lifted an eyebrow.

“I don’t know if I trust you enough to say how,” Anja replied, meeting Mikel’s gaze. “If people here react wrong, that could hurt people I love, and I won’t do that.”

Mikel waved at the letter in her hand. “Haven’t you done it already?”

Anja took a wavering breath and shook her head. She spoke quietly. “I did what I had to do. Send me back if you want, but that’s all I have to say.”

“You’re not wanting in courage, that’s for sure,” Mikel mused. He sat down at an empty table and gestured for Anja to take the place across from him. Dutifully, she did. “Aspirant, all the Guilds got that same letter. Few enough of them care that, were they to find you and return you to your family, you’d become an affair for the Magehunters, and it’s doubtful that would end without someone getting hurt. That’s one mark in your favor. We don’t want blood on our hands.” He regarded her sternly. “Working against you is your stubborn refusal to tell us your whole story. We dislike the idea of putting people in danger, but if you’re hiding something which could endanger the Guild, we don’t know if we’ll have a choice.”

Anja’s eyes widened. “Was that a threat?” she asked.

“That was the official view,” Mikel replied. He leaned closer to Anja conspiratorially and spoke quickly and quietly. “Here’s what’s actually going to happen. First: you’re staying here. Second: we’re getting your sanction papers under a false name. If the other Guilds don’t find out you’re here, they can’t do a thing to you. Third: you trust nobody from any of the Guilds or the Council, or for that matter anyone involved with magic, without checking with me. Fourth: you promise to tell me your story. It doesn’t have to be today, tomorrow, next month, or even next year, but I will hear the whole thing. That’s about the best deal you’re going to get. Will it work?”

Anja thought about it. It seemed to her that, like Hans, Mikel was one of a very few people actually and solidly on her side. She still didn’t trust him, though, and he was asking a lot, but it wasn’t as though she had many choices, and he was watching her expectantly— “I think so,” she said. “Will I have to change Anja, too?”

Mikel shook his head. “It’s been a busy recruiting season for all the Guilds. An Anja Skräskyddsling shouldn’t attract any extra attention. Do you have anything else to say?” He leaned back in his chair. “Alright. Go on, then. Rejoin your band—I eat alone in my study. I’ll see you tomorrow morning. We’ll begin then.”

She turned and walked away, trying to decide whether the caring Mikel or the brusque one was the act.

“Anja,” he said, interrupting her thoughts. She turned around. “I don’t know if you value my word, or what it was that chased you here, but that doesn’t matter. Whatever it was, you are safe now.”

He nodded a goodbye, then, and left Anja more puzzled than before.

 

Ansgar Leifsson watched this scene play out from the balcony. At its end, he went back to his table, frowning thoughtfully.

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The Nighttime Visitor No. 10 – Broken Words

There was a sound like thunder, and Rakel and Two appeared in the safehouse. Rakel tripped and swore, kicked at one of the chunks of stone scattered around her feet, and regretted it instantly. She’d apparently left a pretty fair crater behind her; without access to a telemancer she’d had to settle for a talisman which took a spherical volume and moved it, without regard for what it held.

Rakel set Doorman to cleaning up the debris, and had Two empty its cargo onto the floor. She opened each of the bags in turn and grinned—she’d hit the jackpot. The smallest coinage she found was the one-crown piece, and the rest of the bags were significantly more valuable. She was no good with large sums of money in small pieces, but she was willing to guess that she’d escaped with something in excess of ten thousand crowns, enough to set her up comfortably in the High Quarter for the rest of her life, if she’d been so inclined.

She wasn’t, though, and in any event she’d probably have to give the money back eventually. She told Two to start counting the take, and left a letter for it to take to Kajsa when it finished. They’d have to figure out how to move the money, but that was a problem for another day.

Rakel left the safehouse and started on her way back to her inn. On her mind was the problem for today—how to placate Henrik. He was likely to be hopping mad at her, and not without reason. She’d broken dozens of rules, only some of which she had permission to break, and more than that had committed a very obvious crime using magic, which would no doubt bring the Council and probably even the Chieftains themselves down on henrik, and he certainly had more important things to do.

She half-expected the call before she got to the inn, but she made it without hearing his disembodied voice shouting at her. She shivered at the thought of it; normal as it was for a diviner to study scrying and illusion together, the way a voice so projected sounded simply raised the hairs on the back of her neck. She waited in her room for a few hours and, finally, frowning thoughtfully, decided he had nothing to say. She went downstairs and spent the rest of the day at tafl.

She had just reached her room on her way to bed when she heard Henrik’s voice, echoing all wrong. “What did you do?”

Rakel quickly pulled her door closed and held up her hands. “Look,” she said, “I had very good reaons, and—”

“No,” Henrik cut in. “I want to know what you did. We’re hearing stories about a crazed mage and quite a lot of money spent on a cover-up, but nothing specific and nothing official.”

“Oh.” Rakel scratched at her neck, and was a few moments in answering. “I, uh, robbed a bank.”

“What?!”

Rakel was ready for it, though, and kept talking before Henrik could say more. “If I want to get in fast, I have to draw attention to myself. I’m prepared to give the money back if I have to. Talk to Kajsa and she’ll handle it, only I think the money should officially come from the Magehunters. Better if people don’t ask too many questions about it, right?” No response was forthcoming. She filled the silence. “Is that alright?”

She heard an incredible frostiness in Henrik’s voice. “We’ll talk about this later.”

Rakel waited a minute or two, then shrugged to herself. As her head hit the pillow, her last thought was that she hadn’t expected it to be that easy.

 

Rakel woke to the sound of her door exploding off its hinges. As splinters rained down around her, she launched herself out of bed and pulled her dagger in the same motion. One tough by the door, she saw, which she could handle, and two crossbows in the hall, which would be a bit more problematic.

Something silvery flew at her head, and she threw herself out of the way. It clanked off the wall and fell right in front of her. She had just enough time to come up with an appropriate word before the talisman triggered and she felt her muscles lock.

One of the crossbowmen leaned down into her field of view. “The boss says nice trick,” he said, tugging a bag over Rakel’s head, “and he’d like to talk to you.”

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Three posts coming Saturday

What with coming back from Russia and getting all of my affairs in order in the US again, I’ve fallen behind on the administrata of running this place (which is to say, turning generated writing on paper into postable writing in electronic form).

I’ll be wrapping up all our current chapters come Saturday, after which I’ll be taking another week or so off to write the science fiction interlude. Sorry for the slipping schedule.

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The Nighttime Visitor No. 9 – A Daytime Withdraw

The square was perhaps one hundred and fifty yards across, divided into rings by broad avenues by lines of trees. The bank stood alone in the middle. A few of the paths ran straight from the outside edge of the square to the bank. Guards patrolled the whole of the park, and others were posted along the spoke paths to stop those without legitimate business from getting too close. Rakel suspected that some of the citizens wandering around in the square were actually the Shadow Brotherhood’s men, but she hadn’t been able to prove it. It was a good thing, she thought, starting down one of the spoke paths, that she wasn’t planning on leaving by the front doors.

The pain from the casino incident had become manageable, and so she had left her armor at the inn. That freed her to wear something which made her look a bit more well-off; although she hadn’t gone so far as to put on a dress, her shirt and trousers were of a fine cloth and a fine cut, which made the pendant she wore look less out of place than it would have otherwise.

It was, of course, not simply an ornament, and it hadn’t always looked like one either. Rakel could recall instances when it had been a fork, a coin, and in one particularly memorable incident, the key to a set of manacles. What it was was a tool: an abjurer and a conjurer, working together, could create a few varieties of talismans which prevented the use of magic in their areas of effect, and Rakel had decided that a tool to defeat those was a nice thing to have. To her knowledge, there weren’t any other ones in the world. As she neared the checkpoint midway along the path, she felt the pendant stop its gentle buzzing against her neck. She reached up and touched it idly. She was inside the bank’s wards now.

One of the guards hailed her. “Might I ask your business?”

Rakel stopped and answered amiably. “I’m here to open an account.”

“With what funds?”

Rakel waved vaguely at Two, which opened one of its hands to reveal a coin pouch. “Three hundred crowns,” she said.

The guard eyed the construct. “I’m not sure,” he said, picking his words with obvious care, “that he’ll be allowed inside.”

“Nonsense,” Rakel replied shortly. “It’s no different than a porter, and I saw you let one of them past on my way here. If there’s nothing else…?”

The guard looked to his fellows for support and found none. Rakel walked past him, and he offered no further challenge. She let out a deep breath once she’d made it a few steps. She reached the steps to the bank, and went up them and through the front doors. Nobody tried to stop her or Two, and just inside she touched her pendant again.

The bank’s wards would of course be talismans, trinkets to which a conjurer had bound a spirit, to which another mage had in turn given directions. It was a significantly less expensive way to protect a place from magic than hiring an abjurer full-time, and no less effective; if the ward broke, it would take some time for a new talisman to be put in place, but any mage working magic powerful enough to bring down the ward would certainly be noticeable enough before he finished to meet his end as a repository for crossbow bolts.

Of course, minor magic in sufficient quantities was also perfectly capable of breaking a ward, and so one quiet afternoon Rakel had asked herself what would happen if she made a talisman that didn’t actually do anything, but did so with great energy. It sufficed to say that she had nearly torn a hole in the world itself, and that, after a very stern lecture from Henrik Gunnarssen, she had spent several weeks fixing the damage to both the real world and the Weave.

Her pendant was a refinement of that first design. Even now the spirit bound to it was vigorously doing nothing, and very shortly—

The pendant buzzed again, and there was a piercing whine. Rakel frowned. An alarm on the ward was an innovation she had not foreseen, but she was committed now. She took two more talismans from her pocket, dropped one, and tightened her fist around the second. The first hit the floor, and Rakel felt her muscles lock in place. The second fired a moment later, and she could move again. Everyone else remained frozen, but the guards outside had probably heard the alarm, and so she didn’t take the time to admire her work.

She hurried to the vault door, placed a third talisman against it, and glanced at the entrance. The first two guards to rush in had been paralyzed as soon as they got within her talisman’s range, but the others, keeping back, were aiming crossbows—

Rakel dove behind a heavy wooden desk, and bolts clattered off the wall behind her. She looked back over at the vault door; it was already starting to soften and sag. “Go!” she shouted at Two.

The construct pushed through the door, dragging taffy-like strands behind it, and Rakel began to count the seconds. More than thirty, she figured, and things might get a bit hairier as the bank’s security brought its own stock of talismans into play. A count of twenty-seven later, Two emerged from the vault, bags of coinage hanging off it, and ran to her side.

Rakel stood and ducked behind the construct as the crossbow bolts flew again. She pulled the last talisman from her pocket, said a few words at it in Elvish, and grinned.

 

There was a sound like thunder, and before the guards’ eyes, the mage and construct vanished.

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Never Alone No. 10 – Eirik’s Tale

Eirik blinked, nonplussed, and the man was gone. He spent the rest of the day deep in thought, and over the evening meal saw that his mother was watching him more intently than all the portraits on the walls put together. She said nothing, though, and that night Eirik slept well.

The next morning he complained at his tutor until the poor man threw up his hands and gave up. Eirik pretended to read a book from his father’s library, and as soon as there was nobody watching him he returned to the window. It was two days before he saw the man again; a heavy fog had rolled in off the sea, and some instinct told Eirik that without a view of the sea he wouldn’t see the man. That same instinct told him that it was important that he keep trying.

The third time he saw the apparition, he realized it was changing. It was now a pale man, younger than Eirik’s father, wearing a sailor’s oilskins. Eirik watched him with sidelong glances. The man stared back. Eirik shifted from foot to foot uncomfortably

“Hello,” he ventured, finally turning to look at the man straight on.

The sailor held his gaze and lifted a hand to point out the window at the fjord. “Do you think it friendly?”

Eirik looked from the man to the window. When he turned back to answer, the man was gone.

That night at the evening meal, he noticed something that made him smile.

The man was there again the next day. When Eirik took his place next to him at the window, he saw a hale and hearty sailor, a length of rope coiled over his shoulder. “Do you think the sea friendly?” he asked.

“No,” said Eirik.

“No?” the sailor replied, eyebrows shooting skyward in exaggerated surprise. “Whyever not? See how it waves!”

 

Eirik, likewise, shot his eyebrows up. Nissa laughed outright, but Brynjar simply stared. “Did that really happen?” he asked.

“Every word is true,” Eirik said. “That night I told the joke at the evening meal. My father looked like it had been him who saw the spirit instead of me and said that the only person he’d ever heard tell it before was his brother, who died when I was very young. He was working in the tops when a gust came up the fjord and nearly capsized his ship. He went into the water along with the spar his lifeline was tied to, and it was all over before they could turn the ship to look for him.

“I saw his portrait on the wall the night before and recognized him. My father demanded I tell him where I heard the joke, and I did. My mother didn’t believe me, but when I insisted I was telling the truth, my father gave me a chance to prove it. Mikelsfjord usually has the pleasure of hosting a handful of mages, and he summoned one of them to see if I had any particular talent.

“It turned out to be a diviner, so in response we received a letter, sealed and dated the day before and signed by a witness to that effect, which said ‘Yes’ and nothing more. My father sent another letter to arrange a meeting, and we got another letter of the same sort which said, ‘He has potential.'”

“That seems a bit complicated for—” Brynjar began.

Eirik interrupted with a snort. “Haven’t met many diviners yet, have you?” he said. “None of them can resist the chance to show off. After we got his second letter, we wrote to the Guilds. The aendemancers made the most eager response, and here I am.”

“What about your uncle?” Nissa asked.

“My father built him a shrine in our hall of memories. We light a candle to him every now and again, and that’s enough for he and I to talk once or twice a year.”

The coach rounded a bend in the road, and ahead through the rain the rough outline of a log wall was visible. The road wound up the side of a hill toward it.

“Höjdheim,” Eirik announced. “Have you a story?”

“We’ll have to decide which one first,” Brynjar said.

“And then decide how to tell it,” added Nissa.

“Or decide who’s going to tell it.”

“Or just both of us tell it,” Nissa shot back.

Brynjar leaned back and looked up at Eirik. “You might have to wait until tomorrow,” he said.

“Probably,” Nissa agreed. She got up, and Eirik obligingly moved over to let her sit by Brynjar. They put their heads together and began to whisper.

Eirik amused himself by watching them. Every once in a while, Brynjar would glance up to check on their progress toward the town. He did so once again, but this time kept his eyes up and cocked his head. Nissa began to ask him a question, but he shushed her, and then he was out of the driver’s box and climbing to the coach’s roof.

“What do you see?” Eirik called over the noise of the storm.

“There are people by the gate! A lot of them!” Brynjar said, climbing back down and into the driver’s box. His eyes were wide. “And they don’t look too happy to see us.”

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