Enter The Graf Spee No. 1

Today’s guest post is brought to you by author John Brimlow.

The bridge of the Arys was a precise affair. Instead of the traditional array of plate glass windows, the bridge was enclosed with thick armored steel plates. Small, glass-filled slits provided some semblance of visibility. There was one man stationed in the very bow, operating the large wheel controlling the rudders. One man stood to either side of the rudderman, to be able to feel changes in the zep’s inclination. The man on the starboard side controlled the bowplanes, and the man on the port side the tailplanes. Behind each elevator man stood the engine men; one for the four port engines, and one for the four starboard engines.

In the middle of the bridge stood Ernst Franz, in temporary command of the zeppelin while the captain was away. Ernst checked his watch for the umpteenth time and continued to pace the bridge. There was no getting around it. Captain Harlan Calhoun and the Countess Katarina von Schmeisser were overdue. Their plane should have been sighted half an hour ago. Perhaps their haul was bigger than expected, and the weight was slowing them down. Or perhaps they were caught. Or perhaps their plane was damaged. But there was no sense idly speculating. He walked back to the plot room. There, Jan Larsen tracked the ship’s course with a pencil over a map of the South China Sea.
“Jan, do we have a fix on the Empress Eugenie?”

“Ah…” Jan started shuffling through the neat stack of notecards on the table, finally pulling one out. “Here it is.” His eyes went half closed as he did some quick mental arithmetic. “You want heading 305, absolute.”

Ernst went back to the bridge. “Helm, steer course—” Just then one of the lookout phones rang. He snatched the phone from its holder. “Do you see them?”

Anna, one of the lookouts, turned through pages in Jane’s Fighting Ships as she replied, “No. It’s trouble. We’ve got a large capital ship off the port bow.”

“Type and nationality?” Ernst asked.

“German. Very large.” She continued to flip through the book, checking the pictures against the view through the large field glasses. “Ah. I should think she’s the Graf Spee. Has eight 8.8cm anti-aircraft guns. Main battery: eight 35cm guns. Secondary battery twelve 15cm guns. Neither of those can aim high enough to engage us.”

Ernst hung up the phone, then grabbed the public address mic in one hand and smacked the scramble klaxon with another. Angry electromechanical screams reverberated through the duralumin decks of the Arys. Ernst keyed the mic, “Pilots man your planes. Nazi battlecruiser off the port bow. Engage immediately.” He smacked the klaxon again for good measure.

Ernst turned back to the helmsmen. “Steer course 305 absolute, bow planes up ten degrees, stern planes down five, engines ahead flank.”

 

At the sound of the scramble klaxon, Dr. Aki Nagumo stubbed out her cigarette in an ashtray in her lab, grabbed her flying goggles and dashed out the door at a dead run. Her lab coat billowed, and for a moment she regretted not stopping to take it off. But it mattered little; she had not seen combat in several weeks. This would do, even if there was to be no dogfighting involved. She ran down to the hangars and across the gantry to her plane. As one of Arys’ top interceptor pilots, she had the privilege of parking her little Kawanishi fighter first on the rail. She hopped the safety railing and deftly dashed across the wing. She then leaped up to the docking clamp, grabbed the manual release lever and swung into the cockpit, using her weight to pull the lever down and release the locks. As her fighter slid gently forward, she secured the harness, switched on the fuel pumps and started the engine. She pushed the throttle forward to gain speed, and then she hit the end of the track and dove out of the hangar. A zeppelin launch was one of the more terrifying aspects of flying, where the desire to not crash into the ocean had to be balanced by a need for speed to provide lift. As Aki pulled out of her dive, she scanned the surface and noted the location of the large battlecruiser.

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A Jump To Conclusions No. 25

Amber let the silence stretch uncomfortably before she continued. “Now, we have something else to show you.” She slid the sheet of soft copy square to Heath and tapped it. It flashed, and then showed a still from the recording of Heath’s flight down the stairs of my building. She tapped it again, and it switched to a shot of Heath walking away from the Police Arm cordon. Again, and Heath going into an alley, the timestamp prominent in the frame. Again, and Heath coming out a minute later. “Mr. Heath,” said Amber, “you’ve already been caught in two lies. I don’t suppose there’s anything else you’d care to clarify?”

Heath remained mute, but I could see worry creeping into his expression, written in the set of his brow and the line of his jaw. Amber saw it, too, and embarked upon the second phase of our plan. “Very well. I’ll tell you what happened that night. Our technicians discovered something very interesting, you see. You were embezzling, Mr. Heath.”

I watched Heath’s expression with something like fanatical intensity, and grinned a triumphant grin when I saw confusion on his face.

“You were embezzling,” Amber repeated. “A pittance to you, but of course your greed knew no satisfaction. When McKenzie found out, your oldest friend or no, he had to go. You knew he would be making a jump that night, so you followed him there, your gun in hand.”

Heath’s expression grew concerned again. He fidgeted. I could see his struggle with the impulse to speak out. “Keep at him,” I said.

As advice went, it was not groundbreaking. Amber stood and began to pace around the interview room. Carpenter remained seated, his patent Caledonia glare boring into Heath. Amber said, “You came upon him just as he made ready to jump. He heard you coming to shoot him in the back, and he turned to face you.”

Heath twitched in his chair, drummed his fingers on the table, bounced his leg. I let Amber be; she was more than capable of bringing it home from here.

“You shot him—” she began.

“No!—”

“Do not interrupt me, Mr. Heath!” Amber shouted. “You shot him in cold blood, and then, to cover your tracks, you took the only thing of value he had with him—his revolver—to throw us onto the scent of a robbery! And then you expected to get away with it. Let me tell you, Mr Heath—”

Heath, in desperation, cried out, “That isn’t how it happened!”

Amber slammed her fist into the table. “Liar!”

“No!” Heath said. “He shot himself!”

“You were there?” replied Amber.

“Yes!”

“You pulled the trigger?”

“I did, but I saw with my own eyes that he shot himself!”

Amber relaxed, looked toward the observation room, and said, “Did you get that?”

I looked at Baker, who looked back at me. All of us knew the cameras had been rolling the whole time. Into the microphone, I said, “Very theatrical.”

Something of what he’d just walked into dawned on Heath, and he paled. Pleasantly, Amber explained, “Your gun fired the shot that killed Abbot McKenzie. We found forensic evidence that proves you were the one holding it at the time. We know all about McKenzie’s attempt at a frame. It wouldn’t have worked, Mr. Heath, but in killing him you granted him his vengeance.” She pressed the intercom switch by the door. “Take him to holding, if you would.”

 

By the time we were ready to leave, the sun had gone down and the skyline had lit up. Amber closed the file, and that marked the end of our day. Nineteen hours had passed since the shooting; we’d come in a full six hours under one day from crime to arrest. There would be paperwork to do, and likely appearances before the tribunal, but that was not in our immediate future. Baker had left half an hour ago, and Carpenter a few minutes after. Amber had started on the paperwork, and I had opened my notebook to begin the task of recording the case. After we’d both made a measure of progress, we came to the unspoken consensus that it was time to go; thirty-five hours uninterrupted is a long time to be conscious.

“Interesting enough to publish, is it?” Amber said.

I lifted a shoulder. “Certainly, it was out of the ordinary.”

She nodded. We watched the floor indicator tick downward toward the motor pool. “No doubt,” she said, “you’ve some teeth-gnashingly horrid pun for a name.”

I smiled. “Well…”

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Commentary, A Jump To Conclusions No. 25

I thought it was fitting to put a weekend where Amber left a silence for an uncomfortably long time.

This conclusion marks my third story done in, if we’re counting from when I returned to semi-regular updates at the end of last spring, about ten months. That’s not bad for a part-timer, although I admit I’m a lot less prolific than a lot of other part-timers. Either way, I’m glad to be on a run that’s pretty darned good for me, and even though none of my logging tools say there’s a very big audience out there, I do still hope the few of you there are find it interesting enough to keep coming back. Tell your friends!

As a quick reminder of what’s to come over the next week or two, a vignette by my collaborator on the skypirates universe will run on the front page of Many Words for two or three updates (I’m writing this from the relatively-distant past, and I haven’t decided which way to split it), a preview for the launch of his very own Many Words subdomain. I’ll let him talk about that in his own annotations, though.

Also coming is a Many Words subdomain I’m planning on using as a personal blog, while standard manywords.press will only host writing and writing-related news, so you can filter out specific sorts of my blather more easily.

That’s all for now.

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A weekend update

Apparently, there’s a big attack on WordPress-powered sites this morning. It’s equally a relief and an insult that I’m not facing any issues. My server has a built-in defense against brute-force attacks in that it isn’t very powerful, and it’s not like a load-induced outage would really inconvenience my handful of readers very much.

Anyway, I have about a dozen things to do today, including car repair, some writing and editing, and some various other smaller tasks, so I’m going to get to it.

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A Jump To Conclusions No. 24

We waited another half an hour before the technicians had our last piece of forensic evidence ready: the revolver the uniforms had found in the alley was a match for the bullet that had killed McKenzie, and it had been handled recently by Heath.

We prepared our interview room. Amber filled a few boxes with unrelated case file hard copy, and gave them all the prominent label ‘Dalton Heath’. Any experienced criminal would have dismissed it as amateur hour, but Heath didn’t fit that profile, and although I didn’t expect him to cave merely because we appeared to have evidence, I counted it as a factor that would work in our favor. I set a sheet of soft copy to cycle through a few photographs and left it on the table. Baker made a quick run to the evidence department and returned with a pair of revolvers matching the weapons involved in our case, bagged and labeled as though they did. Amber ran over the plan with me one more time, though she hardly needed the help after five years of experience with my methods. With our preparations complete, Baker and I retreated to the observation room, and Amber called for Heath to be brought in.

He sat with his head held high. Carpenter gave him a minute to confer with his solicitor, then ushered the solicitor out. Pausing in the doorway, the solicitor looked over his shoulder and said, “Don’t say anything. Not a thing!”

Before he could get anything else out, Carpenter closed the door on him. Baker looked from the window to me. “Won’t that make this a touch more difficult?”

“If I read him right, I wouldn’t think,” I said. “We’ll see, though.”

“Hello again, Mr. Heath,” Amber said, revealing nothing by her tone or expression. “I don’t believe you’ve met Inspector Carpenter. We’ve a few question more for you.”

“My solicitor has advised me to answer nothing. Do you have a writ?” Heath said. Outwardly, he was calm. He was talking, though, and I relaxed a little. If he would talk to us, we had an in.

Amber shook her head. “We’ve chosen not to compel testimony at this time.” Heath sat back while Amber continued. “Some new evidence has arisen.” She moved one of the revolvers into Heath’s line of sight. “Are you familiar with this weapon?” she asked. Heath remained mute. “This one, perhaps?” she said, sliding a second revolver over to its twin. “We have it on good authority that these weapons were purchased by Abbot McKenzie—and also by you. They were to commemorate the founding of your company, were they not?”

The sight of the two guns together had drawn a reaction from Heath. He unfolded his arms and placed his hands on the lip of the table before him, and his posture shifted, straighter and further from Amber and Carpenter. “He might nearly have said something there,” I said into my mic. “He’s on the defensive.”

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A Jump To Conclusions No. 23

In the hall, I fit my comm to my ear and called Amber. “Sam,” she said, right as she picked up. “We have excellent news. My friend in University Park found the dealer who sold the weapon we found. The buyers? Abbot McKenzie and Dalton Heath, on the occasion of the founding of Heath, McKenzie, and Company. They bought a matching pair and a display case.”

“Tying Heath to the murder. I, too, have good news—the woman I spoke to, Minerve Caswell, knew both McKenzie and Heath. She says that McKenzie became withdrawn two months ago, when we would have expected him to should he have been framing Heath. More usefully, she saw Heath last night, with timing that proves conclusively that Heath was not at home at the time of the murder. Her building has cameras.”

“Well.” Once again, I could practically hear her smile. “Sounds as though we’ve some footage to watch.”

 

We invaded and occupied a conference room on the 72nd floor, and ten minutes later the technicians had readied video feeds from Caswell’s buildings and nearly all of the street-level cameras in Upside. We started outside Caswell’s apartment, where we found Heath arriving. The time stamp read 22:34. We ran the video backward, switching cameras to follow Heath out of the building and along the streets. Several times, he ducked into the Underground, paying in cash to take trans that didn’t lead directly toward his destination.

“Suspicious,” said Baker.

I could hardly disagree. Heath had some rudimentary knowledge of fieldcraft, and it might have fooled passerby or the police on the street, but watching it from afar revealed it as amateurish. Even so, we nearly lost him on a change of trains in Upside Central. Eventually, we followed him back to the vicinity of my apartment. He went down an alley and emerged a minute later, and then we ran out of cameras. Amber ran the video back to the first glimpse we’d had of Heath, walking calmly away from my apartment building while the Police Arm established its cordon.

Amber dispatched some uniforms to search the alley where it appeared Heath had stashed the weapon. “I’m rather more comfortable holding Heath now,” she said. “I’ve a growing pileup of circumstantial evidence to point to instead of a hunch.” She smiled, satisfied. “Do you think we might be able to force a confession?”

I mulled it over. Heath was a proud man, but he wasn’t stupid, and I doubted he would have planned such a high-profile killing with any chance of escape. He didn’t seem willing to sacrifice his freedom for vengeance, unlike McKenzie.

It was almost immaterial, though. If Heath had planned to kill McKenzie so publicly, he would have known he would be caught, and he would have aired his grievances without hesitation; therefore, he had probably killed McKenzie in the heat of the moment. A confrontation, one thing leading to another, and in a flash of anger Heath pulling the trigger.

If that was so, he would be more reticent to admit to any wrongdoing, hoping to escape the tribunal without a conviction for murder, and we’d have to draw the confession out of him. If it were McKenzie I were playing, I would have laid out the evidence before him and let his mind do my job, but Heath would take more prodding than that. I sketched out my plan for Amber.

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Commentary, A Jump To Conclusions No. 23

As I write these last few annotations all in a row, I have the chance to talk about things that I would have missed or forgotten about if I’d done them one at a time as has become my habit.

In the previous entry, I added a little detail about Sam’s notebook I probably should have added earlier (except I didn’t plan it ahead of time). Nexus the city doesn’t look particularly far-future right now, which is something I worry about a little bit. This story didn’t really have any fancy easy interplanetary travel, or a particularly science fictiony murder, or many futuristic features. Part of it is that I’m sort of a retro personality even when I’m writing futuristic stuff; the idea of a notebook that you write in, and then you can wave your work off of it and come back to it later, is appealing to me.

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A Jump To Conclusions No. 22

I made a note of it. It fit the timeline on which I still suspected McKenzie had gone murderously vengeful. I had no doubt Amber would have more questions on the topic of McKenzie, so I turned to the next page in my notebook, wiped the writing on it back into its memory, and said, “Tell me about Dalton Heath.”

“Abbot warned me about him,” Caswell said. “Frequently. The only way Abbot could have been more severe would have been to outright call Abbot a predator.”

I raised my eyebrows. “Would that have been apt?”

“He was something,” she replied. She looked down at her lap and shook her head. “I was a rising star at Heath, McKenzie, and Company when Anneli left Abbot—my success had more to do with my own talents than patronage, and Heath took notice of me after several of my projects met with approval directly from Sigmund Brenner.” A high honor indeed; the man who lent his name to the interstellar drive had a well-known preference for more negative sorts of reinforcement. “We met a few times for business, then over dinner. I ended up sleeping with him.”

I resisted the impulse to look up from my pad. She had delivered her last sentence with an air of exasperation, and after a moment to gather herself, she launched into the explanation I expected. “I couldn’t tell you what it was about the man. I knew it was wrong—he was married, and if Abbot had known, he would have considered it a betrayal of the worst sort. Even so, the affair went on for the better part of a year before I was able to call it off. Thankfully, Heath didn’t make an issue of it.”

It seemed that she had run out of words, so I filled in. “You’ve established to my satisfaction that you’re familiar with both Mr. McKenzie and Mr. Heath. What caused you to come forward?”

She took a deep breath and let it out slowly. “Heath turned up at my apartment last night, at about half past ten.”

I checked her address in the file, did some quick mental pathfinding, and came to the conclusion that an adequately fit man could have covered the distance on foot in the hour and a half between the murder and Heath’s arrival at Caswell’s apartment. “What happened then?” I said.

“He told me he needed a place to stay. I told him he could afford a hotel room,” replied Caswell. “I saw the news this morning, and I think I knew Heath was involved . It took me this long to convince myself.” She sighed, and I could see it gave her no pleasure to indict Heath, no matter what their relationship may have been.

I lifted my head and looked her in the eye. “Miss Caswell, does your building have cameras?” She nodded. I said, “Please excuse me for a while. We’ll likely have more questions later.”

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Yes, I know I didn’t update

And I’m sorry. I ended up getting home late last night, and I had a few things I really needed to finish. Alas, I ran out of time. I’ll have everything set up to start on Friday; it’ll run for two weeks, then you’ll have a brief teaser from my collaborator on Nathaniel Cannon’s skypirates setting the week after that, and finally, Nathaniel Cannon and the Secret of the Dutchman’s Cross will start.

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