Commentary, The Nighttime Visitor No. 2

Ugh. I really don’t like this entry. I’d claim it was badly written on purpose (*cough*), but that would be dishonest[1].

The lack of small caps is, of course, purposeful.

[1]On rereading it before it goes live, I find myself liking it more. It may not be the best writing I’ve ever done, but it’s more Henrik’s voice than I thought before, and it does quite adroitly describe the relationship between Henrik and Rakel. It could also be that I’m tired, but I don’t like that explanation as much.

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