I reserve the right to reuse entry titles in chapters after their first appearance.
Weekend open thread
Estonia was cool, if a bit small for my tastes.
On to more important matters: what’s coming up here, and everything I’ve been doing which is unrelated to my current location. First off, I’ve been getting my fix of British comedy in the form of Yes, Prime Minister, a lovely piece of work which has acquainted me with lines such as “Minutes are not to record events, they are to protect people!” and something about Britain’s nuclear deterrent which ended with “It costs fifteen billion pounds, and therefore it must be magnificent!”[1]
It was something along those lines, anyway. Second, last night I made my way through the first two hundred pages of The Lies of Locke Lamora, which I would tentatively describe as Ocean’s Eleven in an Italian Renaissance-inspired fantasy setting. So far I’m liking it very much.
Third, I recently finished the first two parts of Kim Stanley Robinson’s Mars trilogy, which ended up being boring, but that’s always the problem when authors whose names aren’t Dostoevsky try to philosophize in their books. What kept me going was the incredible character writing. I’ve never been that deep inside someone else’s head.
I did mention stuff that’s coming up here. Those plans are exactly same, actually, so I won’t repeat them here.
[1] And just now, “What about a monocle?”
Commentary, Never Alone No. 6
As I wrap up the writing for this chapter—that is, numbers seven through ten—I realize that much of it is a monument to my inability to pace things properly, and the rest of it is a monument to my lack of direction when I started it. I apologize for this, and note that The Nighttime Visitor is probably the best chapter of the current bunch, what with actual rising action.
Fortunately, I’m pretty sure all of my current readers are people I know personally, and still reading more for the novelty of seeing me write than for the actual story. I promise you it will be more exciting to read in the future.
Never Alone No. 6 – Alvarsson’s Idea
Like a vacation, Eirik thought without enthusiasm. He walked across the grounds, wondering if he might have gotten off easier if he’d thrown his lot in with Baltasar. Probably, he thought, but there was no use in speculating about it now.
He came to the library. It was one of the smallest buildings in the compound, its collection consisting mainly of volumes too narrow in scope, too obscure, or too much of both to be considered for inclusion in the Library of the Prefecture for the Preservation of History, and therefore on a very short list. Eirik nodded to the librarian, who didn’t even notice him, and wandered back through the shelves. They brought back fewer memories for him than they would have for most aendemancers; Baltasar was a firm believer in practical experience as a teaching tool, and besides that had very little time for books to begin with. Eirik had learned Elvish in the library, and following that had never really had any reason to come back.
He did remember the study rooms at the back of the building, though, and only one had a closed door. He chanced it, and opened the door on Alvarsson and his aspirants. The master paused mid-lecture and raised an eyebrow.
“Master Alvarsson,” Eirik said, smiling at him with enough venom to drop a dwarf at twenty paces. “I’m not interrupting anything, am I?” From the books open in front of the aspirants and Alvarsson’s glare, it was clear that he was, but he breezed onward anyway. “I need to talk to your students about our upcoming trip, if you don’t mind.”
“Spoke with Master Hrafnssen, did you?” Alvarsson said, looking to the aspirants and then back to Eirik. There was a calculating glint in his eye while he let the silence drag on for a moment or two longer than strictly necessary, and finally said, “Very well. Speak with Master Eskilsson, then, take your midday meal, and meet me here when you’ve finished. Understood?” At last he looked away from Eirik and to his students. They nodded, and with a chilly nod of his own to Eirik, Alvarsson left.
Eirik sat down and gave the aspirants a smile which held nothing besides amiability. On the way to the library he’d asked Book to dredge up their names from the memory of whenever it was that they’d been introduced to him. “Brynjar Alfsson and Nissa Skräskyddsling, correct?” he said, making sure to sound a hint uncertain, as if he had to think about it—Book’s existence could only very tenuously be justified under the Code’s rules about magic of the mind, and Eirik made every effort to keep it a secret.
Brynjar smiled back, but the girl frowned. “Master Alvarsson’s mad at you,” she said.
“We disagree on a few things,” Eirik admitted. “Guild affairs. We’ve never been on the friendliest of terms.” A bit of a lie by omission, but he saw no reason to burden them with the details. “That’s hardly relevant, though. Has anyone told you where we’ll be going and what we’ll be doing there?”
“Only that we’re supposed to go with you,” Brynjar said.
“Were you at the Assembly?”
“Only for the first day. It was a little boring, we thought.”
Eirik chuckled. “It didn’t get any better. In the end, we decided to offer admission to Anja Grevdarsdottir, and I’ve been chosen to deliver the invitation.”
“What about us?”
Eirik wasn’t really free to give them the actual reason. Baltasar had told him that there was a budding rivalry between Alvarsson and himself, and that Eirik and these aspirants were merely the opening moves in what would no doubt go down as one of the greatest examples of the game of Guild politics in history. Telling them that they were nothing but pawns in a larger scheme wouldn’t do anything for their confidence in the Guild, and they weren’t allowed to start losing that for another five or eight years. Eirik had come up with an alternate explanation. “Two reasons,” he said. “First, she’s going to have questions. I don’t spend much time at the Guild anymore, and even if I did you would still be better than me at answering questions about what it’s like to be an aspirant. Second, it’s a fine opportunity for you to practice what you’ve learned. We’ll be working on your skills along the way.”
“We haven’t worked much magic, though,” Nissa said.
“Everyone has to start somewhere,” said Eirik. “We’ll be leaving tomorrow morning, and we’ll likely be away for a little more than two tendays. Be packed and ready to go at sunup tomorrow. I’ll hire a coach for us. Any questions? Alright, then, off to lunch with you. No reason to inconvenience Master Alvarsson more than I have to.”
The aspirants bowed their heads and left, and Eirik sighed. He had a few things to do himself—first, get his own affairs in order, and second, leave a letter at the docks for the Wandering Spirit, expressing to Captain Eriksson his deep regret that he would not be joining the ship’s company for the run back to Mikelsfjord.
Never Alone No. 5 – An Offer
The next morning, sunlight poked cautiously into Eirik’s room. Eirik grunted, rolled over, and went back to sleep.
A knocking at his door roused him again, only a few minutes later. He grumbled and got out of bed, wondering who it was that wanted him at this infernal hour of the midmorning, and what it was that couldn’t wait until some more sensible time, like the afternoon.
He yanked the door open, and had to look down to see two aspirants. The first, a boy, was lifting his arm to knock again, while the second, a girl, was trying to stop him. Both were about ten or twelve, and they froze when they saw him. The boy recovered first, elbowing the girl as he bowed his head. She followed suit.
“Good morning,” Eirik said, once it became clear that they weren’t going to ignore the silly rule about saying nothing until recognized by a superior.
“Good morning, Master Eskilsson,” the boy said. “Are you well today?”
“Do you have a good reason for waking me up?” Eirik snapped. “If you do, could you skip the pleasantries and tell me?” The boy’s mouth worked for a second, and he looked to the girl for help. She had none to give. Eirik softened; not everyone had grown up with Baltasar as their point of reference for acceptable standards of politeness. “I’m fine, thank you,” he said, making an effort to sound warmer. “What can I help you with?”
“Master Hrafnssen told us to ask you if we’ll be ready to leave today,” the boy said cautiously, watching Eirik as if worried he would bite. The girl whipsered something to him, and the boy quickly added, “He said we should give you this, too.”
Eirik took the letter from him, unfolded it, and pressed his lips together. A few moments passed before he remembered that the aspirants were still there. “I’m not sure when we’ll be going just yet. Where will you two be later today?”
“We’ll be studying in the library with Master Alvarsson,” the boy said. “Until the evening meal, I think.”
Eirik smiled. He managed to keep his rising ire out of his voice. “Well, if I haven’t found you by then it’ll have to be tomorrow or the day after. Is that all?”
“Yes.”
“Then I’ll talk to you later,” he said. In unison, they dipped their heads and scurried off. Eirik retreated to his room and glowered at the letter as he read it in full.
Ten minutes later he was stalking across the grounds toward the canteen. In his years as an aspirant, he had developed a strategy for getting into shouting matches with Baltasar. It had two elements: take him by surprise, and get a good running start. Even when he managed both parts, it wasn’t anything approaching a guaranteed success.
Still, he was going to try. He marched into the canteen, spotted Baltasar alone at his usual table, and was there in a matter of moments. He slammed the letter down in front of Baltasar and shouted, “What is this?”
If he hadn’t been watching very closely, Eirik would have missed the instant of surprise that showed on Baltasar’s face. Calm chased it away, and the old man picked up the letter and read. Eirik glanced to the side, and as he expected the rest of the mages in the canteen had barely noticed. Most of them wore the perpetually hunted look that stemmed from long association with spirits; their eyes darted around, only momentarily settling on things just out of normal sight.
“It’s a letter,” Baltasar said. “A fine example of one, informative and to the point.”
“You know that’s not what I meant,” Eirik shouted, punctuating with a fist to the tabletop. “You’re sending me west doing what amounts to a courier’s job, and forcing me to take—”
“It was Alvarsson’s idea, you imbecile, and he wanted an official reprimand lodged with the Council. I talked him down to this,” Baltasar said. He spoke with the sort of exaggerated patience normally used with small children or the insane. “You’re wrong about the girl, and an idiot for thinking I’d let a difference in opinion stop me from using your vote the way you would, but I can’t stop you from being wrong and stupid.”
“What does he want the reprimand for? I did everything right,” Eirik said. He wasn’t getting any less angry, but he felt the target of his ire shifting.
“You didn’t recruit the girl right then and there,” Baltasar said. “If I thought she was a prospect and not a menace I’d agree with him. If you’d tried to talk to her, you would have seen she had potential.”
Eirik sighed and shook his head. Once again, he’d leaped to conclusions that were entirely wrong, and was worse off for it. “Well, what now?” he said.
Baltasar smiled. “Think of it as a vacation.”
Commentary, Never Alone No. 5
I am nine minutes early getting this typed. Whee.
That does mean I don’t have time to do my usual last-minute once-over, though, so you’re getting the slightly less polished version.
I also need to find time to properly WordPress more of the posts, since after this weekend I’m out.
I would apologize for the lack of weekend open thread, but nobody ever comments on those anyway.
The Nighttime Visitor No. 6 – Not Part Of The Plan
As she sailed in a lazy arc from the door of the casino toward the street, Rakel was forced to admit that things had not gone quite as she’d hoped.
Of course, it had looked like they had been until no more than a few minutes ago. She’d found a perfect table, occupied by a yappy little man with rather an optimistic view of his skill at the game, another less irritating man who apparently had money enough to simply throw it around in a casino, and a third with a tell Rakel could see from across the room. Needless to say she had done well. A few lucky hands had put her past doing well to doing superbly, and when the majority of the money on the table was in front of her, the bad gambler had finally snapped and accused her of cheating.
This had been part of the plan. Her goal was to be noticed, and a loud argument with an unpleasant person in which she was clearly in the right wasn’t a bad way to accomplish it. What she hadn’t expected was for him to throw his chair back, point, shout, “You’re a dirty cheater!” and dive over the table at her. In fact, she hadn’t expected it to the extent that he’d landed his first punch. That was where it started to go wrong.
In hindsight, Rakel thought, it would have been wise to change Two’s instructions regarding threats to her safety to something a bit more subtle. The construct had charged across the room, tossing tables and gamblers alike aside, and grabbed her assailant and casually thrown him into the nearest wall.
Rakel hadn’t counted on such a strong display of unity from the rest of the room. There had been a moment of silence, broken only by the mewling of the gambler lying in a heap on the foor, and then as one everyone else had charged at her. She took a swing at the first one, and was willing to bet that she’d broken his nose. The next four got her by the arms, and as more closed in she’d realized that there wasn’t much to gain by further resistance. She’d sent Two away, and after taking a running start, it had crashed through the front wall while Rakel steeled herself for the inevitable roughing up.
It hadn’t been as bad as she expected. One of them hit her in the gut with a table leg Two had broken off on its way out, and another had lectured her on proper behavior and the limited patience of hosts for party crashers. The one with the table leg had given her another whack, and then they’d pitched her out the door.
The paving stones rose to meet her. Distantly, she heard the casino’s door slam. She blinked, and one of the door guards was standing over her. “We did warn you,” he said, and absently kicked her in the ribs before going back to his post.
She tried to take a deep breath, and a heartbeat later decided that was a very bad idea. She got up on her hands and knees and found a piece of debris from Two’s explosive exit which would do as a makeshift crutch. With it to lean on, she managed to get to her feet, one arm curled over her stomach. She’d taken worse hits, but not by much, and this one was going to hurt for a while. The thugs watched her unsteady progress down the street with obvious amusement.
It was half an hour before Two found her. She tossed aside the crutch and let the construct carry her. She would have liked to go back to her safehouse, but that would have been unwise. It wasn’t much good as an emergency hideout if people knew it was there, and she had no doubt someone was tailing her. Besides, it was far too early in the game to reveal just how prepared she was.
She had Two stop at the first cozy-looking inn they came to, and managed to keep her back straight long enough to send Two around to loom in the alley behind the inn, arrange for a room, and buy ink, a pen, and a piece of paper. She climbed the stairs, found her room, and all but collapsed onto the bed. Holding the paper against the wall, she wrote “DO NOT DISTURB” in very large print and set it on the nightstand. She curled up, failing to put the pain out of her mind, and reflected that, even though she hadn’t planned to take the rest of the day off, plans change.
Commentary, The Nighttime Visitor No. 6
I don’t know if this is my favorite entry yet per se, but it was certainly the most entertaining to write.
The Nighttime Visitor No. 5 – To Work
“Don’t let anybody but me in. If someone else does make it past the door, smash him.” Rakel pointed at Doorman’s club. Breezily, she continued. “Understand? Of course you do. Bar the door after we leave. Two! We’re going out!”
She had a busy afternoon planned. There was a feel for this part of the city to develop and attention to attract, and, in the slightly more distant future, there would be feathers to ruffle. She couldn’t help but grin. The only hard part would be holding off on ruffling feathers until the time was right, which wasn’t really her style. Perhaps, she thought, there was something to be said for a more direct approach.
With Two trailing behind her, she struck out southward. They walked for the better part of an hour before Rakel found what she was looking for. It was an otherwise nondescript building with a sign that quietly declared the place a casino, though Rakel thought ‘gambling den’ was probably a more apt moniker. More importantly, two thugs of the sort she’d occasionally had to kill stood by the door, each leaning on an axe and glowering at passerby.
Rakel walked up to them, shrugging off their increasingly hostile looks. She was moments away from the door when one of the thugs held a hand out. The other said, “It’s invitation only today.”
“Oh, of course. Invitation, invitation,” said Rakel. She made a show of patting her pockets, and finding nothing there patted Two on the arm. “Ah! Here it is.”
The thugs exchanged a look. One of them chuckled. “Is that some kind of a threat?” the other said, snorting. “You know who owns this place?”
“I know who he hired to guard it—a pair of ten-for-a-crown brutes without the sense to realize that it’s a lot harder to explain the new construct-shaped door in the wall than the one extra gambler whose money is just as good as anyone else’s.” Rakel lifted an eyebrow at them. No reply was forthcoming, so without shifting her gaze an inch she added, “Looks like pretty thick wood, Two. You’d better get a good start at it.” Dutifully, the construct tromped across the street and sized up the run.
Before it could start, the thugs gave each other a look. One of them rolled his eyes. “The boss won’t like this at all, you know,” the other said.
“Well aware.” She waved Two off, and the construct returned to her side. “Unfortunately for him, I don’t intend to leave any time soon. Tell him I sincerely hope we’ll find a way to keep out of each others’ ways.”
The thugs didn’t stop her as she and Two walked past them and into the building. Once they were gone, one of the thugs said, “Two tendays?”
The other snorted. “If that. I’ve never seen anyone that eager to die.”
The first grunted. There was a moment of silence, and then he said, “Five chieftains says she comes out in the air.” They shook on it, and the two of them resumed their vigil.
Inside, Rakel told Two to watch from a distance. It wandered off into a corner, and Rakel looked for a table to sit down at. Her initial thoughts about the place were vindicated by what she saw. It was dimly lit and drab, and besides the long table along the back wall serving as a bar, the only furnishings were chairs and round tables for the gamblers. To a man, they were playing cards. Rakel knew the game; it was common enough in human society, and had been for long enough, that if she wanted to talk about another game she’d have to say something more specific than ‘playing cards’.
It was also a game at which Rakel was good, being based more around bluffing and strategy than luck. She was pretty sure she could sit down at any table and leave with a profit, but that wasn’t the plan.
She spotted an open seat at a table showing all the characteristics she was looking for and went to take it. The players turned as one to look at her as she sat, but she merely smiled and dropped a bag of coins in front of her.
Commentary, The Nighttime Visitor No. 5
I have nothing to say here.
The next one is better.